So how will I be better for having read negative reviews about my boys? Because I'm using it as a learning experience. Listening to my audience is the best way to figure out what I can do to improve my writing. The main two complaints for The Sergeant especially and BBNLT on a smaller scale are that they are too long and have too many sex scenes. Alright, guys you've got me! That is 100% true. Like most authors I have lots of ideas and scenes in my head for my stories. And they all seem so lovely, I don't want to lose any of them. So I had to learn the hard way - through tough reviews - that readers enjoy a long journey, just not one that makes unnecessary pit stops.
Participating in National Novel Writing Month, or NaNoWriMo, will help me with that problem. The goal is to write a 50,000 word novel in a month. If I'm held to that number, I won't be able to create another epically long masterpiece. (I know they're not really masterpieces. But in my head they are. Gotta have that confidence to be able to share my scribblings with the world). So as I work on my outline for Ortega's Pet, I keep reminding myself to keep it right and tight. If I dream up a scenario, great. But I'll be ruthless in deciding if it's necessary to write into the story. And even then, I'll still have to "trim the fat" and remove some of what makes it onto the computer screen.
On to the next complaint. Too much sex! Are sex scenes necessary to the story? Well, considering I write erotic romance, hell yes. But! Do I have to have so many? This one is difficult for me. I did a previous post where I discussed how I try to use my sex scenes to further the plot and to build the characters' relationship. I will continue to do this of course. I'll just have to do less of it. (Boooo!) I suppose if I'm planning a shorter story over-all, it won't be as hard to cut back on all the sexy good times as I think. And since there will be less of them, I'll just have to make sure they're even more deep and intense than usual. So that's a win for you, the reader. *insert cheesy wink*
I look forward to seeing how I come out this go round. I've got my red pens ready. Maybe I should also get a few boxes of Kleenex. I know I'll have copious tears to shed as I cut words out of my manuscript.
Are you entering the madness that is NaNoWriMo? What are you doing to prepare?
Here's a few links to visit that cover trimming the fat from your manuscript:
http://www.writingcorner.com/resources/formatting-grammar/tightening-your-manuscript/
http://www.novelrocket.com/2014/07/trimming-and-toning-your-manuscript.html
http://www.rachellegardner.com/how-to-cut-thousands-of-words/
Okay, I have to say it....one of the things I LOVE about your books are the length of them. I read really fast and so that makes it hard to find good stories that I can sink into. I must confess that the first thing I noticed when thinking about getting the Sergeant was the length, even before looking at what the book was about. Although b/c I loved the Sergeant I didn't even glance at the page # listed for BBNLT. There are not too many sex scene's in either books. :) I'm more than likely going to read anything you put out, but please a long story every now and then isn't bad.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paula! I appreciate that. I promise to keep up with the long stories, just maybe not as long as before. =) And maybe every now and again I'll sneak in another massively long tome. ;-)
Deletelet me say you rock at writing your story and let me just say you can never have to much sex scenes in a book . I love long books the ones you can get lost into the hero of the story and even the bad boys try not to let the negative comment impact how you write because its your story to write and tell. love your book keep up the good work looking forward to reading more BBNLT
ReplyDeleteHello, Anon! Thanks for the compliment. =) Glad to hear that someone likes all the smexin' good times I come up with. I won't let the negative comments affect my style too much, just give it a few tweaks. BBNLT: Max & BBNLT: Nate come out next week on the 18th. I hope you check them out. =)
DeleteYea you just made my day I am so looking forward to reading both books max book seem like its going to be some twist and turn in the story plot hehe yes . I can't wait to read more of your work keep up the great writing
ReplyDeleteHi. Just wanted to say that I loved the length and sex scenes in both books. I'm looking forward to your future books. Don't let the negative reviews change too much of your writing! Keep in mind the good reviews too!
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